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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 12, 2009 21:32:29 GMT 1
Yeah, Kim would be too worried they'd turn into fried eggs hanging on a nail.
I finished Skin Deep and I really wanna read MOAR. It was great!
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Post by smitten on Jan 12, 2009 21:44:54 GMT 1
Wow. You know, if you feel really strongly, you could always leave me a review there on the site. You can do it anonymously if you don't want to register and everything. I'm really flattered anyone's even slightly interested in fanfiction when the REAL THING is almost here! (Tortured Soul is the back-story between him and Jasmine. It is a bit long, but I wanted to get across that being a prisoner was really boring. If you like misery, it might be worth a read. )
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 12, 2009 22:52:07 GMT 1
I'll leave a review no worries!
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Post by topii on Jan 16, 2009 13:56:54 GMT 1
I read till chapter 6 :]]] Still very good and very interesting BTW did you call her Rose becuase of Titanic? You know.. Rose and Jack..
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Post by smitten on Jan 16, 2009 16:42:15 GMT 1
Ah - chapter 6 is my favourite! I only watched the Titanic once, and that was a long time ago, so no that's not why. Tbh, I didn't think a long time about her name - I just didn't want an unusual name.
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 16, 2009 16:43:01 GMT 1
I like the name Rose.
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Post by topii on Jan 16, 2009 17:50:14 GMT 1
Kk :]] I was just wondering I'll read on soon
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Post by smitten on Jan 23, 2009 22:25:52 GMT 1
I have a question. If you've read Chapter 6 of Picking up the Pieces but you've not read Tortured Soul, what do you understand happened between Jack and Jasmine? I found this hard to write - because when two people get together they don't just recount something that happened in the past naturally. So I tried to leave clues, because I wanted the story to come out. Was I too subtle, I wonder? Only answer if you've finished all your revision.
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 23, 2009 22:58:59 GMT 1
I had a vague idea that he'd have met her in China, but that's it. It's was good though, very 24-ish
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Post by topii on Jan 24, 2009 12:57:41 GMT 1
I guessed that she was his doctor or something in China and they wanted her to make him talk but he didnt....
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