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Post by smitten on Jan 24, 2009 14:09:31 GMT 1
I had a vague idea that he'd have met her in China, but that's it. It's was good though, very 24-ish Copy that. You liked it, and it doesn't bother you that Jack is just inexplicable brutal to this defenceless female who turns up on his doorstep. Okeydoke. lol
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Post by smitten on Jan 24, 2009 14:12:12 GMT 1
I guessed that she was his doctor or something in China and they wanted her to make him talk but he didnt.... Topii, you are very, very close. Answers in Tortured Soul. Thanks guys, it's good to get feedback. When you're writing, it's actually really difficult to know what comes across and what doesn't, so thanks!
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 24, 2009 17:12:04 GMT 1
I figured that would be because she was Chinese and they were there to capture him again
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Post by smitten on Jan 24, 2009 17:50:44 GMT 1
Yes, he's also thinking that.
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rainbow
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JACK BAUER
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Post by rainbow on Jan 25, 2009 18:09:18 GMT 1
I'm going to start reading all your works today and I'm sure I'll be impressed
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Post by smitten on Jan 25, 2009 20:12:14 GMT 1
I do hope you enjoy it Rainbow!
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 25, 2009 20:37:27 GMT 1
It's a real treat, I'm sure she will!
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Post by smitten on Jul 20, 2009 23:04:41 GMT 1
I am writing some more. It's incredibly addictive.
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jul 21, 2009 9:11:06 GMT 1
Excellent! I can't wait to read it
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Post by smitten on Jul 21, 2009 11:12:32 GMT 1
This one is going to take a while. Jack is young, 18. I'm setting him up for the life we know he leads in the run-up to season 1.
Here's a taster:
Jack braced himself. He’d been set up, but he had no choice but to play this one out.
‘I’m going to say something, and you’re not going to like it. Then I’m going to say something else you will like even less. And at the end, if you hate me, you never want to see me again, I won’t blame you. You can shout, you hit me, it’s fine, because I’ll deserve it.’
Teri held him steady in her gaze. ‘Shoot.’
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