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Post by smitten on Jan 6, 2009 22:31:11 GMT 1
Anyone else here dabbled in fanfiction? My efforts can be found here: www.fanfiction.net/u/1542709/24addict...if anyone needs distracting from the wait till next week. Of what I've written I'm happiest myself with Tortured Soul - but it might feel a little long to read, I don't know. There is some action in Picking up the Pieces, in the later chapers (you can skip the beginning, and it won't matter). I'll say no more. Happy for all comments!
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 11, 2009 22:54:03 GMT 1
I'll take a look tomorrow Smitten, looks interesting!
(Sorry it took so long, I didn't realise this thread had been made)
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Post by smitten on Jan 12, 2009 9:49:18 GMT 1
Well I daresay, Sam, we have more important things to be excited about today! )))
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 12, 2009 12:16:10 GMT 1
I took a look last night and Smitten, they were excellent!
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Post by smitten on Jan 12, 2009 12:35:51 GMT 1
Thanks! What did you read? Hope you didn't read it all, when you're supposed to be revising!
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 12, 2009 12:38:14 GMT 1
I read Skin Deep and Chapter 1 of Picking Up The Pieces
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Post by smitten on Jan 12, 2009 12:46:04 GMT 1
Skin Deep I like. Chapter 1 of Picking up the Pieces I'm not sure about... That was the first thing I committed to paper. So to speak. Picking up the Pieces is a bit of a mish-mash - I was trying out different things. Can I do this? Can I do that? My opinion is there's better stuff further on.
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Post by Sam Bellis on Jan 12, 2009 13:04:35 GMT 1
I'm on Chapter 5 now I think. It's good.
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Post by topii on Jan 12, 2009 18:47:47 GMT 1
I read the first 3 chapters of picking up the pieced and absolutly loved it!!! You write so good and its very easy to imagine whats going on. I cant wait to read the rest. But one little thing, I dont think i can believe that Kim will call her son after Jack, especially when he is alive. Although I know she really loves him he caused her a lot of pain and i think she said so on day 5. Other than that its amazing!!!
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Post by smitten on Jan 12, 2009 21:26:33 GMT 1
Thankyou topii, I am glad you like it! I did work really hard to get it as good as it could be... I'm not a writer. But one little thing, I dont think i can believe that Kim will call her son after Jack, especially when he is alive. She didn't mean to. Jack was dead... then he was alive... then he disappeared. She didn't think he was coming back. Personally, I don't think Kim would breastfeed, but sometimes the story just requires these things...
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